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onepieceyaoi100Title: Finger Painting
Topic:pr0n SHOWER
Word Count: 300
Rating: PG15
Pairing: Chopper by himself (does thinking about various male Strawhats count?)
Disclaimer: Characters and setting? Not mine. Probably just as well, really.
Summary: Heavypoint is not without its side effects.
Excuse: I plead the canon. And it occurred to me that his hormones would probably usually be reindeer-like, but in his human form...
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It had never been a problem before. He'd been younger, of course, and while Doctorine was a very young 140, he simply hadn't thought of her that way.
Mostly it was Heavypoint, though. On Drum, he'd used it only against imminent danger, and then he went immediately back to his usual relatively childlike form, or Walkpoint, where reindeer instincts prevailed.
But now, he was around people his own age, in Heavypoint quite often, and staying in it long enough for the human parts of his brain to register that he was a fifteen-year-old young man. With all the hormones that entailed.
Fortunately, in Heavypoint, he also had hands, with nimble, flexible fingers and incredible fine-motor control.
And memories. Unlike the women, the other, older men aboard didn't even seem to notice him if he happened to wander past as they took their own showers each day, took those few precious moments for themselves.
Luffy, soapy hands wrapped around his own back, stroking delicately down the length of his insanely flexible body.
Usopp, head thrown back so his hair fell in mesmerizing waves halfway down his back, his knees shaking but not in fear.
Sanji, stretching out, legs split impossibly wide against the wall, smooth muscle shifting under pale skin as he twisted lithely through the motions.
Zoro, face reflecting total focus and concentration, his broad hands moving steadily in counterpoint to the stillness of his body.
Nnngh, yes, that was the best image of all, steady beat and shift of muscles and that one quiet gasping cry--
...
With a sated, if unsatisfied, sigh, Chopper turned the spray of the water briefly on the tiles he'd just painted, rinsed himself off, and turned off the shower.
He really was going to have to figure out what to do about this.
Topic:
Word Count: 300
Rating: PG15
Pairing: Chopper by himself (does thinking about various male Strawhats count?)
Disclaimer: Characters and setting? Not mine. Probably just as well, really.
Summary: Heavypoint is not without its side effects.
Excuse: I plead the canon. And it occurred to me that his hormones would probably usually be reindeer-like, but in his human form...
~~~
It had never been a problem before. He'd been younger, of course, and while Doctorine was a very young 140, he simply hadn't thought of her that way.
Mostly it was Heavypoint, though. On Drum, he'd used it only against imminent danger, and then he went immediately back to his usual relatively childlike form, or Walkpoint, where reindeer instincts prevailed.
But now, he was around people his own age, in Heavypoint quite often, and staying in it long enough for the human parts of his brain to register that he was a fifteen-year-old young man. With all the hormones that entailed.
Fortunately, in Heavypoint, he also had hands, with nimble, flexible fingers and incredible fine-motor control.
And memories. Unlike the women, the other, older men aboard didn't even seem to notice him if he happened to wander past as they took their own showers each day, took those few precious moments for themselves.
Luffy, soapy hands wrapped around his own back, stroking delicately down the length of his insanely flexible body.
Usopp, head thrown back so his hair fell in mesmerizing waves halfway down his back, his knees shaking but not in fear.
Sanji, stretching out, legs split impossibly wide against the wall, smooth muscle shifting under pale skin as he twisted lithely through the motions.
Zoro, face reflecting total focus and concentration, his broad hands moving steadily in counterpoint to the stillness of his body.
Nnngh, yes, that was the best image of all, steady beat and shift of muscles and that one quiet gasping cry--
...
With a sated, if unsatisfied, sigh, Chopper turned the spray of the water briefly on the tiles he'd just painted, rinsed himself off, and turned off the shower.
He really was going to have to figure out what to do about this.
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Date: 2006-12-12 04:05 pm (UTC)I've read it three times since..... from when I noticed it posted.
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Date: 2006-12-13 01:58 am (UTC)Glad you liked! It's nice to see it well-received. :)
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Date: 2006-12-12 04:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 01:58 am (UTC)Glad to hear you liked! :)
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Date: 2006-12-12 05:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 01:59 am (UTC)*grins* Glad you liked!
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Date: 2006-12-13 06:01 am (UTC)Since people have brought it up--I don't mind Chopper porn... hell, I've written some pretty lemony stuff with Chopper. I can see the shota thing people mention, though. He's in his mid-teens, but he does seem pretty naive and act quite young. The bestiality thing, though... [shrug] To me, it's all about whether or not the being can understand sex and give or refuse consent. Since Chopper can reason and speak, I don't really have a problem with Copper porn on that level. The age thing is more of an issue than the reindeer thing, imo.
Well, that's my 2 beri. ^_^
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Date: 2006-12-13 03:02 pm (UTC)As to the other... I think for me it's that the line between the creepyshotavibes place and the creepybeastyvibes place is a fine one, easy to cross, and very hard to balance on. A lot of potential for mishandling, I suppose. Obviously found a spot, for this piece, but...
Anyway. :) You wannit cookie for that 2berri, or I give you little piece pie? And tea, must havit tea...
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Date: 2006-12-12 08:24 pm (UTC)*evil cackle* Welcome to the fold lil' reindeer, I'm sure they can make use of your horns, hooves, etc.etc.etc
*sigh* Now here's the big question chopper...who shall you top first?
*giggles insanely* Another fantastic fic by Bronze-san, the tiger in you really brings out some fab fics, I was right to do the chopper-dance when seeing this here. I was so right.
*wiggles for all she's worth*
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Date: 2006-12-13 02:01 am (UTC)*watches you squiggle* whee!!!!!!! :) I like wiggle-dances! :) (Your appreciation doesn't make me happy at all, aho! *sparkle*)
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Date: 2006-12-12 08:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 02:04 am (UTC):) Glad you enjoyed!
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Date: 2006-12-12 10:56 pm (UTC)Oh, I'm sure he'll figure out something.....*pervy grin*
XD
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Date: 2006-12-13 02:04 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-12 11:12 pm (UTC)But I liked this. And it made sense.
And I think it makes up for the 50 beri bounty.So please excuse me while I go have a cup of tea and try to reconcile myself to the death of one of my few One Piece squicks. And memory this to mark the occasion, of course.
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Date: 2006-12-13 02:24 am (UTC)Want some cookies to go with that tea? (I'm in your memories twice! SO flattered...) :D
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Date: 2006-12-12 11:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 02:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 12:04 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 02:26 am (UTC)*hands you a towel for the drool*
Glad you liked!
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Date: 2006-12-13 03:41 am (UTC)Serioulsy though awesome story, and very hot.
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Date: 2006-12-13 01:15 pm (UTC)Thank you! Glad you liked. :)
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Date: 2006-12-13 05:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 01:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-13 05:11 pm (UTC)*frames kudos and hangs on wall*
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Date: 2006-12-13 09:55 pm (UTC)Poor Chopper indeed. Most of us go through that difficult time without catching glimpses of 4 incredibly hot men masturbating, and I'm not sure if he's better or worse off. Probably worse. ..."smooth muscle shifting under pale skin"... And Zoro... *zones out just a bit*
...Anyway. Nice drabble. ^^;
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Date: 2006-12-14 03:10 am (UTC)And, I dunno, *we* only get to imagine the view he gets, so, um... I dunno?
:) Glad you liked!
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Date: 2006-12-14 02:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-14 03:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-03-29 12:04 am (UTC)After reading some of the other comments, I feel like a dirty old lady for being all "Chopper? Pr0n? Whoo hoo, doko da?!" -_-;;;
Meanwhile...thank you for writing this. I love it to a million bits. ^_^
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Date: 2007-03-29 06:56 pm (UTC)As far as that little 'whoohoo!' reaction goes, to each her own, nah? I'm just glad you enjoyed my little take on it. :)