[identity profile] jensa-chan.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Touched
Rating: PG for Merry death?
Word Count: 224
Pairing: Nakamaship-ish
Topic: Blue
Warnings: Spoilers more or less up to the current chapters.

Luffy sat atop Thousand Sunny’s bowsprit and gazed at the sky, fixated on the soul-searing color. His nakama had learned to take the brief respites from Luffy’s enthusiasm when they could, so long as he didn’t appear troubled. Seeing that he wasn’t, they puttered about their daily comings and goings with slightly less harassment than was usual.

‘Blue...’

... the heart-stopping color of Zoro’s lips after getting sliced to hell by Mihawk...

... the frightening grey-blue tinge Nami’s face had adopted as he and Sanji scaled the Drum Rockies...

... the way Usopp’s face looked after he and Luffy got into breath-holding competitions...

... the seemingly endless shades and patterns of it Sanji had on his shirts...

... the way Chopper’s nose would scrunch in poorly-concealed happiness, flare in anger, or twitch curiously at new scents...

... the emotions that had welled up as Robin choked out “I wanna live!”...

... the crazy flipped-back style of Franky’s hair that only began to hint at the attitude that danced beneath...

... the deepest color of flames that had set Merry free...

... the exact same color of the ocean and sky that had welcomed Sunny’s first voyage...


Luffy smiled a smile as vast as the oceans and swung a dangled leg back and forth. Blue was definitely a color that had touched all his nakama.

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Hallo. First entry and all that. I only wish I could have pinned down the images running around in my head better than this; concrit would be greatly appreciated. :D

Do I get bonus points for listening to Blue when writing this? 8D

Date: 2007-01-30 08:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystal-chan.livejournal.com
Awww, that's so sweet, and it seems to go perfectly with how Luffy thinks. I love how you associated the color with every crewmember, it makes me smile.

Date: 2007-02-01 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bunnymaccool.livejournal.com
the visuals came across really clear with this... awesome job!

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