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[kuraiofanagura.livejournal.com]

Title: Normally it was Coby
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 224
Pairing: Coby/Helmepp
Topic: Tie

Yes.


Here are probably a million of grammar mistakes. but, please, try to ignore them >//<. i hadn't got the chance to send this to my beta-reader.
But enjoy what you can understand XD


Normally it was Coby

Normally Coby was the one with the good attitudes. He was the assiduous one. He was the one with the clean room. He was the one who had the medal for engagement.
Coby was the good boy, who could do everything, who was gifted with the important jobs from Garp or his subordinates.
“I just can’t do that! Why the fucking hell do we need the dress code!!??”. This cry came from the cabin, Helmeppo and Coby shared. Coby wasn’t the one who cursed loudly or even use that sort of language.
Helmeppo couldn’t help, but  he grinned.
“Need some help?”, he offered, already dressed in his white gala uniform. Coby gave him a hurt glare.
“You know, the pirates didn’t teach me something like this, so don’t laugh”.
“..hm”, it was hard, but he managed just to grin. “Just le’me see”, he stood behind the younger one and circled his arms around Coby’s shoulders. The boy blushed and stiffed. The knot of the white tie was horrible wrong. No chance. He chuckled. The good boy Coby wasn’t able to perform a normal tie. Unfortunately for him the dress code said to wear the gala uniform on this event.
Helmeppo had been a spoiled child. Bu he had learned how to make a knot in a tie.
It really was hard not to laugh.


I know, Tobi s normally the good boy. But Coby and Tobi sounds so similiar (or at least in german)

Comments

[sparkestra.livejournal.com]

Aww, that is sweet! ^_^ I can imagine quite clearly that, thanks to his priveledged upbringing, that Helmeppo would have been drilled from a very tiny age how to tie a tie. One small victory for Helmeppo!

[kuraiofanagura.livejournal.com]

1:0 for Helmeppo

[cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com]

The boy blushed and stiffed. The knot of the white tie was horrible wrong

shouldn't that be 'sniffed' and 'horribly'?

But a brilliant drabble ^_^

[kuraiofanagura.livejournal.com]

yeah, you'r probably right.
grammar is a filthy thing, right?
but thanks for the correction *bows* i'm always open for it *g*