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Title: Poor dinosaur
Rating: G
Word Count: 125
Pairing: Usopp and Nami
Topic: Dynamic Duo
Notes: The Mugiwaras are on Little Garden. The island with the two fighting giants. Nami and Usopp are walking behind the first giant (uh, forgot his name .-.) to his home.



„I don’t know what’s more scary“, Nami said.

“Me too. Walking behind a, probably, bloodthirsty giant through a jungle full of MONSTERS!
Or walking right behind a, probably, bloodthirsty giant through a jungle full of monsters WITH YOU!”.

“Right, my opinion, me too”, Nami agreed, but in the back of her brain she was sure the liar would be useful to her… what if the giant asks her who he should eat first?

“What’cha talking there? Something funny?”, asked the giant with his giant axe vibrating with laughter.

Then suddenly a dinosaur appeared between the giant trees.

And they screamed.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And screamed.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

And screamed.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!

And the dinosaur crumbled to earth, his body shacking and blood running out of his ear holes and his, now, white eyes.



AN: Those two are just incredible great in their cowardnes XD

Comments

[key-revolution.livejournal.com]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA

That made my day.

Thank you =)

[key-revolution.livejournal.com]

Er... one last thing. You do use commas a bit too much in the first few sentences. If my brain wasn't so dead I'd be able to point at where ut right now the best I can do is say, "Wait, that's not right."

[kuraiofanagura.livejournal.com]

glad you enjoyd it.

uh, commas, I know. my great weakness. am sorry.
(but the german comma rules are sooo strikt. and there are sooo much. it is really difficult NOT to put a comma. I swear ^^)