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Title: Nobody
Topic: Unseen
Rating: also for the small children
Pairing: guess?
Word Count: 245
A/N: After a long time, something new ^^

Nobody


Nobody had an idea where it come from. Suddenly it was in her palm and a second later between her elegant white fingers.
Zoro had passed a minute earlier, coming back from his stay (his search for the ship) in town. It couldn't have been him because he was laying down on the grassy deck.
Sanji was also on deck, but was busy with the potatoes he had to peel.
Usopp was in the town together with Franky and Brook, looking for some stuff. Together with Nami and Chopper, they all eyed the object in Robin’s hands now.
Luffy, whatever he had done during their break on land, was now also back and was obviously fascinated.
“Who gave you this flower, Robin?”, Nami asked, with a little jealouse hint in Sanji’s direction.
“It smells great!”, Chopper commented, while Luffy glared at the flower. “It has the same color as your hair”, he said.

Some would think a rose is the most romantic flower you can give your love, but the lily between Robin’s fingers, light purple in the middle and pure white petals, proved them wrong.
“Robin-chwan! Where did you get it from?!”, Sanji cried with his “my-heart-is-boken”-dance.
Robin giggled her laugh with a cryptic smile, “seems like I have an unseen admirer”.

Nobody had seen it coming. Nobody had seen Zoro, how he let the lily glide down from his hand in Robin’s palm. Nobody had seen him.


A/N: My previous boyfriend once send me lily. I was so happy! Not even a rose could compare with it *sigh*

Please correct me, if ther are any mistakes! I wrote it in a hurry and ahdn't the chance to correct it ^^;

Comments

Kick-ass and SUUUPAAAA!!! and everything else

[(Anonymous)]

This pairing is awesome in of itself, but together with this drabble it was pure awesome. Grammar could use a bit of fixing, but it didn't interfere with the drabble at all. Loved the Brook cameo; I completely agree that he should be part of the crew. A perverted 80-year-old skeleton can make anyone's day. Change this: "It couldn't have been him because he was laying down on the grassy deck." Get rid of "still" in Usopp's sentence and use "It smells great" instead. And you don't shell potatoes, you peel, dice, slice, or saute them. As I said before, none of that matters because this was AWESOME!!!

Re: Kick-ass and SUUUPAAAA!!! and everything else

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Thank You ^^
My dictonary told me that you shell potatoes >.< stupid dictonary!
Brook HAS to join, no question!
Glad you liked it and thanks again for your help ^^