First Post

Jul. 30th, 2004 12:47 am
[identity profile] peroxidepest17.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
So yeah, my first OP Drabble post. This week's topic just got me. ^_^ Er, Enjoy? Maybe?


Drabble: Warm Place
Rating: er… PG?
Word Count: 300 (exactly, baby! XD)
Pairing: Infinitesimal ZoSan undertones



It was funny that in all their encounters at sea, it was the storm on land that completely incapacitated two of the most formidable fighters of the Straw Hat pirates.

Huddled in the cave Zoro had sniffed out as the first heavy drops had begun, the cook and the swordsman had made the best of their situation and settled in for the night once the weather became hopeless, miraculously after only arguing for an hour about how much they hated each other and how stupid the other was for getting them lost in the first place.

Sanji sighed, currently huddled shoulder to shoulder with Zoro in a not-so-manly attempt to generate some warmth.

Never mind that his pride was getting stomped on all over the place. It was cold. He did not want to die with Zoro’s ugly, stupid face being the last one he saw on earth.

And in their current state of separation-from-the-others, Zoro was the only warm place available.

The chef shivered and inched closer. Taking his movement as acquiescence, an arm was grudgingly draped over the blonde’s shoulders without a word said between them.

Sanji’s pride gave its last, shuddering breath and died.

After a while, he realized this wasn’t so bad. Sure, the storm sucked, and being stuck with Zoro sucked, but there were worse things out there than sharing body heat with a complete jerk while they were lost in the woods.

Yeah. Worse things. He could be stuck with Usopp.

Sanji smiled resignedly to himself with that thought and shifted slightly. In spite of the bad luck, at least he’d managed to find a warm place.

“Oi… if you don’t stop squirming, I’m going to knock you unconscious and steal body heat that way, love-cook.”

A warm place that was also a bastard.

END

Comments? Critiques? Fisticuffs?

whiny Sanji=HI-larity

Date: 2004-07-30 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebelcoyote13.livejournal.com
A warm place that was also a bastard.

*applauds* for that line alone I'm rooing for you! go us first time drabblers!
Sanji bitching gets me every time

Date: 2004-07-30 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yosegaki.livejournal.com
A warm place that was also a bastard.

Bwahahaha.

-k.

Date: 2004-07-30 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yosegaki.livejournal.com
No, no. I've had similar problems.
The best lines, I've noticed, have a tendancy to almost not happen.

-k.

Date: 2004-07-30 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cook32.livejournal.com
ahh... so warm now... that is so nice! and don't we all love a warm bastard!! lol

Date: 2004-07-30 08:39 am (UTC)
dethorats: (bunny)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
I like Zoro's last line, and Sanji's thought is perfect.

Date: 2004-08-02 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
This is so cute! I do so like the way you write these boys!

Date: 2005-07-07 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
*resists urge to quote herself dead*
You are one of the best SxZ writers, really. They are so like themselves, self absorbed, snarky, and whenever sparks fly it warms my heart to no end. :)

Date: 2005-10-02 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winter-sweet.livejournal.com
This is something tha tyou can imagine them doing in the actual anime cause you hit their personality head on.

Date: 2011-04-06 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternallove-495.livejournal.com
Sanji’s pride gave its last, shuddering breath and died.


That made laugh, while the whole fic made me swoon.

Yes, I'm sure being with the swordsman ain't gonna be a smooth ride, but at least he's not alone, right?

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