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[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

TITLE: IS IT NATURAL TO DO THIS WITH YOU?
TOPIC: Nature
AUTHOR: mr_redrum
PAIRING: ZoroxSanji…
WARNING: nc-17???
WORD COUNT: 269
NOTES: Only a little crappy poetry about the first time they have sex...but, really, there's nothing "hot" in here, though...and my very much thank you and love for kakairupowns-san for the beta. Thank you.

It’s only a tiny lick at his nipple

And yet, it makes him squirm a little

It’s only a little kiss on his cigarette flavored lips

And yet, it makes him ache to close the distance of their hips

For every bit of pleasure his long fingers bring to that scar

Somehow he knows that the other man will take him much far

For all of the wariness emitted from his eyes, and stubbornly stay

Somehow he knows that the other man’s warm body will make it go away

They have been a challenge to each other

Him hunting the swordsman down, and Zoro hunting him for more

They have lusted like it’s been forever

Crashing their bodies together, he knows he would make it like a chore

The pain and the bliss from their battles make him want to scream

But he’s afraid that he’ll wake up, only to find out that it was just a dream

And it’s just another day with him struggling with the ladies

Is a gentleman like him even allowed to scream like this?

Is it a natural thing to do this with the marimo?

That when the time for thrusting stops, oddly he feels suddenly lost

Zoro, though, only says, “Don’t think too much, aho…”

By that time he realizes that this is the right thing to do the most

And not only because the words are from the fiercest pirate hunter Roronoa Zoro

But mostly because he at last admits that his heart and body also say so...

Comments

[vulpus-mirus.livejournal.com]

OMGpoetichotsexyesplz. *_*

Those first two verses were very~ nice.

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

thank you for reading ^_^...well, it's not that hot actually...

...and,I kinda want to aiming about sanji uncertain and wariness as a man to have a sex with another man...but at the end he's realize that it's actually natural for him, as he can felt that his heart want it(so he can't lie with his feeling) and his body enjoy it...


again,thank you!...I really appreciate it...

[nonoji.livejournal.com]

I agree!! Those first two verses were... hehe. Delicious.

Your third post on Nature!! This theme is very motivating, isn't it?Including moi, three first-time poster-ers this week!! Wonder whats on next week...? Hope its something as inspiring.

Princple-pervert-sanji-sensei, I have to disagree with you and say this was hot. Very hot. But sweet and cute and...fwahh....

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

thank you,dear student...wait,I think you are already graduated from my school,dear..congratulation!...

and yeah,I think i's great everyone starting to send their stories...cool,man...

but,I have to disagree with you about the hot part in my story,I don't think it's hot enough...it's killing my reputation as a perverted person...*sighed*

again,thank you for reading! ^_^...keep up your good writing!...

[nonoji.livejournal.com]

I think the thing about your poem is that it's not supposed to be pornographic, but beautiful and sweet and romantic. But it's still unintentionally hot. In my opinion anyway.

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...hmmm,have you ever realize that you became more and more be yourself,dear?...you became much more free to speak your opinion. I like that...it's help building your stories, I think...

(although I still think my poetry not that hot...I wonder when I can write a good hot stories...)

anyway,I really do appreciate what you just said...thank you!...and keep posting,lady mihawk-san...

*this sanji-kun have to log out to ask if the marimo would like to be his bottom,tonight...see you again,my mellorine!*

[nonoji.livejournal.com]

Kya, for the comment above, terribly sorry for sounding like I know more than the author! How embarassing. After reading what I wrote last night, I cringed.

Yes, I'm being more myself lately, but don't encourage me too much sensei, or I'll start to think I can write about my opinions on everything, and will become incredibly insensitive and dumb. More than I am already that is.

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

I really sorry for my late reply!...I kind aoverslept again last night...

...hahaha...honestly, you didn't need to apologies,my lady.you didn't do anything wrong.it's true you know, that sometimes I do, don't understand well what I had wrote myself. that's why I mostly got surprised when you, lady in blue and the wise lady always gave review with a detail words exploring my stories or poetry...

again, I think I will courage you more...because with the talent you've got, you only deserve that...

now, because, I'm overslept last night, I will spend a little time of my morning to read your third post...I guess, the theme it's very motivating isn't it? ^_^...

hahaha...I also have to agree on you on that, my lady mihawk...

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...ps: and please don't call me sensei again,'kay my lady?...I still didn't do something that worthy enough, to be called something like that...you're too much flattering me...sorry...

[nonoji.livejournal.com]

But... but...you're my ex-headmaster!! Can I then at least call you senpai?

[anna-q.livejournal.com]

hahaha..poor dear headmaster, already squirming when she got bombarded with sweet words. lol. anyway . . .

*glomp*

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this~!!

I always like the way you ended each line with rhythmic words as the line before/after. And when you did actually write something like this which hinted NC-17 - depends on how we read it - is SU~PERR!! sanji's self-consciousness with the sex is apparent yet he finally admits his defeat when it's a natural thing all along. wah2.

*glomp again*

now i'm tagging along nonoji getting you squirmed more XD

*snickers*

p/s: i always thought you link your posts straight to your page which got me weirded out when i didn't find them in your journal (mostly the latest ones). so they're here. lol.

*continue stalking*

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...*blushed*...thank you...


BUT STOP WITH THE WHOLE GETTING ME SQUIRMED MORE,PLEASE!...


*sighed*...all my mellorinne decide to exploding my head,I guess...

but thank you for already reading,my wise lady!...now,let me out of here,so I can explode my head off, without endanger everybody...

[reddy-chan.livejournal.com]

>=O LIAR! You must have been the Kakashi-sensei, not Sanji-kun! You said this isn't that hot, so I planned to skip it, i'm not into poetic stuff either, but when I read this, I was like --> O///////o;;
...
...*cough* So, I just want to say that you've expressing Sanji's feelings very well, includes his fear, his hope and his faith to the Swordman. Nice work well done! =3

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...helllooo,dear!...good morning!...I really sorry for the late reply...I've been lost in a labyrinth called life...

...anyway,my very much thank you for already reading,reddy_chan!...


...well,I still think it's not that hot compare to my new collection of icha-icha yaoi...but,because you already read it while you didn't like poetry that much,so,I would like to say my very much thank you again ^_^...uhm, would you like some ramen,then?...

[tshapo-chi.livejournal.com]

you definately have a very good grasp of visual wording. Wonderful work as always.

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

...hmmm,then I will definitely will said that you also definitely have a very good grasp of visual wording,sensei...remember that you already make me had a nosebleed while reading the hot part at your last chapter of DK?...only a good writer like you with a good visual wording can do that,you know...

[tshapo-chi.livejournal.com]

*blushes* ty...

that's the sign of a good author. kudos to both of us!!