[identity profile] talismanic-fire.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: The Fire Within
Rating: PG13 or higher...
Topic: Free (kind of...)
Words: 216
Pairing: Smoker/Ace
Summary: Its just a little poem I wrote... Well, I thought it was sweet...

--

Smoker glanced at the crumpled slip of paper:

I can't stay away from you,
For whenever your fingers,
Curl around mine, gently, clumsily,
The fire within me grows.

I must never be parted from you,
For whenever your arms,
Wrap around mine, warmly, firmly,
The fire within me quivers.

I shall never want to let you go,
For whenever your skin,
Rubs against mine, softly, harshly,
The fire within me trembles.

I must never get lost from you,
For whenever your lips,
Move against mine, aloof, demanding,
The fire within me hungers.

And if I ever am free from you,
May I forget the feel of your heart,
Beating with mine, slowly, quickly,
And may the fire within me die, parted from its smoke.

"Why, exactly, was this tucked inside of your pants?" Smoker asked Ace. He would never admit it, but the  fiery poem touched him somewhere deep inside that cold heart of his.

"Maybe because I knew you would find it there. Now finish undressing me, old man."
***
Smoker lay next to the now sleeping Ace, with the poem still ringing in his ears.

And if I ever am free from you,
May I forget the feel of your heart,
Beating with mine, slowly, quickly,
And may the smoke within me die, parted from its fire.


~Heh, heh...

Did u like? Comment even if you didn't :D
...And would someone friggin' tell me how to post to multiple communities at once?

~~innocent yet not <3

Date: 2008-08-20 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melisandre013.livejournal.com
I loved this. Did you write that poem yourself? If so, it's incredible. I love the imagery.


And Smoker in love is soooo cute.

Date: 2008-08-20 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melisandre013.livejournal.com
Well, it takes a lot of talent to write good rhymes, but this was incredible. Personally, I like blank/free verse like this better.

Date: 2008-08-20 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mr-redrum.livejournal.com
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!...somehow I kinda felt in the last two poetry,about ace's possessiveness towards smoker...thank you for writing it,man...I'm going to save this one...

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