hoh. finally wrote one.
Sep. 6th, 2008 08:49 pmTitle: Funeral of hearts
Pairings: None. Centered around Luffy
Rating: Quoting
Wordcount: 148. Honestly, only 114 came from me.
Topic: Sinking
Warning: Very very recent spoiler.
“Oi! What did he do to Zoro?! Where did Zoro go?!”
He would not believe what he saw. But he could not take any more risk.
“All three of you! RUN~~!!”
Gone. Brooke. Usopp. Sanji. They were all gone.
“What are we meant to do now?!!”
He was in denial.
“You bastard!!!”
Anger. He tried to attack.
“Franky~~!!”
He was bargaining time for him. But he could not save him either.
“Nami!!!!”
Her face. This utter depression was reaching beyond its limit.
“Chopper! Robin!”
“Stop this already!!!”
He tried to bargain again. This time on his own.
“Robin! Run for it~!!!”
Still, he failed. Miserably.
“I couldn’t even save a single nakama~!!!”
Face down on Earth but his heart had long gone together with their disappearance, mind sinking in his ocean of failure. Yet he refused to accept this grief. For he will raise and fight till his last breath to find each one of them. His nakama.
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Date: 2008-09-06 01:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-09-06 01:54 pm (UTC)The "I couldn't save a single nakama!" line always kills me dead...
Nice feeling at the end!
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Date: 2008-09-06 02:42 pm (UTC)And to see Luffy made such face was heart-wrenching.
Very devastating.
Yet to me, his last face before Kuma-chan palmed him screamed battle cry.
And thank you hun for reading this =]
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Date: 2008-09-06 03:14 pm (UTC)I hate you. You ruined my cracky mood.
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Date: 2008-09-06 03:26 pm (UTC)i didn't meant to *sobs*
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Date: 2008-09-06 05:24 pm (UTC)Unless you write another one!
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Date: 2008-09-06 06:02 pm (UTC)i...
*teary eyes*
..totally hopeless in cracks.
*bawl*
*sniff*
hai2. i'll think of something.
you're evil *pout*