*BOOM!* EXPLOSION TIME!

[devlinnreiko.livejournal.com]

I saw the topic and this immediately popped into my mind. Jumping right on it too. LOL. School makes me write - I like school. ^________^

Title: Rage Inside
Rating: PG
Word Count: 224
Pairing: Smoker x Ace
Warnings: Spoilers for recent events related to Ace
Topic: Explosive

 

For reasons unknown, the call had been made that Smoker’s ship would be the transporting vessel for Portgas D. Ace to his execution. Whether it was due to his stance in the New World or the knowledge that he had tied in battle with the pirate were left unanswered.

The worst part had been the eerie calm that had settled throughout the whole transfer. The Impel Down marines had brought the man aboard with few guards surrounding them. They asked where Smoker wanted the prisoner and left him lying on the deck before nodding to the Commodore and proceeded to leave the ship.

Ace didn’t move an inch. Smoker could see the faint rising of his shoulders and the way the blood ran down his neck from the reopened wounds. Nodding to a few of his men, they asked where Smoker wanted Ace to be taken.

The insanity voice deep down kept telling him to take Ace to the gun powder room and con the boy into becoming the fire hungry monster that raged on in hell; to break the calm and become a raucous.

Smoker hid a sigh with an exhaled breath of smoke as he looked upon Ace’s body, for once wanting the pirate’s body to burst into flame and becoming the explosive counterpart his own logia deep down yearned to touch.

Comments

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Aww...poor smoker and ace...their love is full of the angst right now untill this gets resolved!

[mr-redrum.livejournal.com]

I SECOND THIS OPINIONS...I don't know why, but right at the moment, every time I thinking about this couple, it's all angst that comes up...

...Ace didn’t move an inch... T_T...you make me want to cry at this part, devlinnreiko-san...

ace didn't move an inch
smoker could heard a singing finch
trying to wake him up with it's sing
but ace doesn't even blink
his cheek pale washed it's pink
smoker knew that his fire isn't flaming
his fire lips cold
only death been told...

[devlinnreiko.livejournal.com]

No crying!! *hands tissue* Don't wanna capsize the ship.

Nice addition too. So sad! Thanks for commenting.

[devlinnreiko.livejournal.com]

Yes. Angst love. I will not stop until justice is in this resolution. Besides anything to get Ace on Smoker's ship LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[lug-ar.livejournal.com]

so well written that i'm almost sure you wrote one future chapter.
probably one reason it reduced me to tears *snivel*
gosh, I SO hope Ace will be rescued by Smoker...!

[devlinnreiko.livejournal.com]

*blushes* I hope so too. It's a good dream. ^___^ Thanks for reading and commenting.