Um... I've been really bummed out today... probably why I wrote this...

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Title: I Saw Red
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 303 <--still epic fail XD XD
Pairing: Zoro/Sanji implied, Sanji/Other
Topic: DOORS

Note: It was funny really, I was reading the topic for this week and wondering what I could do for 'Doors', when the iPod threw "I Saw Red" by Warrant at me randomly. Which was EXTREMELY fitting and pretty damn randomly cool! 8D

If you're not familiar with the song, check it out! Here's the video if you want. It's hard to believe this song is EIGHTEEN YEARS OLD!!! .... and I'm probably aging myself here! XD XD XD

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

He stands frozen in the doorway, hand still cupped in the shape of the knob even though the door has long ago escaped his grip and swung away to the wall beyond. Muted grunts and gaspy little breaths echo inside the room.

Sweat and slick and the tangy wafts of a smell that could only ever be associated with sex fill his nose and storm directly into his brain. As if his eyes hadn’t seen enough. As if a different set of senses needed to make absolutely sure he was witnessing the act taking place before him. As if the image wouldn’t be permanently burned into his memory.

One of the participants finally takes notice of him. A small smile spreads across the other’s lips, slowly … like a careless poison. An arm is unfurled and long, outstretched fingers beckon him. As though he is quite welcome to join. As though this interlude is nothing more than a game, and extra players would be happily accepted.

As though his heart isn’t currently being torn asunder and trampled by dark, weighty limbs.

He turns sharply on his heel and walks quickly from the room on legs burdened by warring emotions. He runs as far as the well crafted wooden planks will let him escape and tumbles bonelessly to his knees.

They’d never mentioned words like ‘exclusive’ or ‘monogamous’ or any other meaningless term that may have suggested other hands, other bodies were off limits. They may have never mentioned it, but it had damn sure felt like the truth.

He surges to his feet barely in time to lose the contents of his stomach over the railing. A small voice in his head reminds him that the cook hates when people waste food. A louder voice responds that it serves the asshole right.

Comments

[popkin16]

Ouch.. I so hope that Sanji ends up regretting this. Zoro should totally rub a new relationship in Sanji's face, "You could've had this" style. *Nod*

*Cuddles Zoro*

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Ouch..

... Yeah... probably why I shouldn't write fic when bummed out. XD XD XD

<3 <3!!

[popkin16]

Well, even if it was a sad, I-hope-Sanji-someday-regrets-it type of fic, it was still a Bunny fic, so it was awesome. XD

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

UWAH!! It doesn't make me happy at ALL when you say things like that!!! *Chopper wiggle*

<3 <3 <3!!!

[popkin16]

Haha, you sure look happy. :)

[jasssparkles.livejournal.com]

Ooooh. So good. So very very good, and that last paragraph really nailed it for me.

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much!! <3 <3 <3!!!

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

AWWww..poor Zoro. Well you need to iron out these things like 'is other sex okay?' it is the Ero-cook after all!

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

*nodnod* ... poor bastard just didn't see it comin'.

<3 <3 <3!!!

[andyprue.livejournal.com]

Please excuse me while my brain go WHUT.
...WHUT?!...??

My little fangirl heart is broken...poor Zoro ;_;

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

*pat*pat* ... I'm sorry!! Didn't mean to break any fangirl hearts!! ;___;

<3 <3 <3!!!

[andyprue.livejournal.com]

Then you can maybe mend this miserable fangirl heart by writing a sequel...of some sort? Making this longer with a happy ending?...
Ah, just the remnants that tend to be stupid speaking...Don't mind xD

Just realize I'd never say how I love this piece of fic <3 Well I really do xD

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Actually, I've pretty much already sold myself on writing a LONG version of this! XD XD I have to make Sanji suffer a bit, of course ... but my endings tend to be happy. ^__^

Thanks!! <3!!

[kotszok.livejournal.com]

Am I a bad person for envisioning Zoro running to the edge of the ship, jumping overboard and swimming away? xD

This is heartbreaking, poor Zoro ;;

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

Only if I'M a bad person in that I TOTALLY almost wrote it like that! XD XD XD XD

GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!! >3<

I'm considering continuing this in a longer fic ... what do you think? We tend to like the same things, so I'm curious what you're opinion would be.

^____^

[kotszok.livejournal.com]

anything long would be awesome, tbh. i tend to like longer fics more than drabbles.

AS LONG AS YOU UPSDATE WALRUS OSSAN

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

i tend to like longer fics more than drabbles.

Yeah, me too ... there's so much MORE to love!! XD XD XD

AS LONG AS YOU UPSDATE WALRUS OSSAN

Yes I know!! It would be much easier if SOMEONE WOULD MAKE THE PLOT BUNNIES STAY AWAY!!! >__< I've started THREE new (LONG) stories in the last week alone!! F*ckin' bunnies.

.... well... FOUR now, if you count the fact that I TOTALLY want to continue this one and make Sanji suffer realize his mistake. ^__^

[ohsnap9292.livejournal.com]

Sanji, how dare you throw Zoro into emotional turmoil?! I'm gonna punch him in the mouth!

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

YEAH!! You tell him!! ........ heh... ^^;;;

<3 <3 <3!!!

[ohsnap9292.livejournal.com]

Oh I'm gonna teach him a lesson he won't soon forget! Too bad he's not real...

lol I love your icons!

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

WHOOT!!! 8D

... and Thanks!!! <3!! ^__^

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

Ow. Gut punch. But a damn, damn good one.

[bunnymaccool.livejournal.com]

#^__^# Thanks! <3! Now I just gotta get Sanji back! *rubs hands together evilly*

[anyjen.livejournal.com]

Aw, poor Zoro... ;_;

*wants to kick Sanji now*