HEY! I'm first!

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Title: It was MY test
pairing: Sanji->Zoro&Luffy
words:300
topic: Sin (envy)
rating:Pg13



I’ve never been jealous of the shitty marimo. Seriously, it is one thing to be the best…like greatest chef in the (hopefully) five Blues…but to run around trying to prove it? Why bother? I have my own dream so I’ve never been jealous of the idiot for his.

Sure he’s strong, skilled, and good looking, but I’m all those things too.

Integrity? Confidence?

Check and shitty check.

So to be truly envious of Zoro, to know and feel envy strong enough to recognize it as a deadly sin…it’s new.

I was ready to give my life…for the crew in general but for those two idiots in specific. I couldn’t really say which one was more important. They both are tied to my heart now. I try to show it in my cooking, I don’t expect them to notice it and they don’t.

So to unequivocally show them how indispensable they have somehow become…it’s a chance I’ve really wanted for sometime.

And even though I am willing.

Even though I say “Let the flower of death bloom in me.”

It is him. That damn swordsman that forces me aside and takes my chance without caring he just fucking jammed the hilt of that shitty sword into a particularly painful spot between two broken ribs.

He even survives. Zoro was tested and he passed.

It is not the same to have been there ready to take it and being denied. Nothing proven. Now that it’s in the past doubt has even started creeping in…like maybe I knew somewhere in my subconscious that Zoro wouldn’t let me die.

To have someone who hates to rely on others have to consider that as an option…that he has the power to make me feel this way, it makes me envy the bastard all the more.

Comments

[nonoji.livejournal.com]

This was...
First of all, you made me feel incredibly stupid as I had to look up 'unequivocally' like a airhead dumbass who only reads trashy porn.

But aside from that, this was really painful and yet really in character and my respect for you goes up once again.

Good job muffin girl! Actually, you are now upgraded to cheesecake. Cheesecake is good. Cheesecake girl!

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Mmmm Cheesecake...yummy.

Glad you liked it! I had considered using an easier word but I think sanji is full of the smarts so left it in...extra benefit you know it now! It allows you to sound extra snooty if you toss it around enough.

yays! I blush at your praise!

[popkin16]

I have an incredible weakness for Sanji --> Zoro fics since they're so rare (and yep, I know Sanji --> Luffy in this fic too. I'm just saying you poked a weak spot of mine).

This was so painful, I felt sympathetic toward Sanji. He just wants to show how much they mean to him, and in typical Straw-hat fashion they are completely oblivious.

I love Thriller Bark Fics *siiigh* XD

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Wow! THanks for your comments! I too love thriller bark. You've made me happy to poke your weak spot!

LOVE the icon...Perona is such a dirty girl!

[popkin16]

You're welcome! Thriller Bark is one of my favorite arcs. XD I forgot to mention this, but I love your fics *nod* You're a weak-spot poker, ne?

LOL She sure is! It's not her fault though, her powers made her that way. Long ago when she first recieved those powers, a mean boy by the name of Timmy dared her to peek into the men's Onsen, and what she saw there...forever changed her.

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Perona perona...
don't leave her alone or
Shes off on her own not to be late
anxious to watch the men masturbate
She'll ghost through the floor
What she sees she'll adore...
Her devils fruit power, it must have been fate...
Watching men fuck and jackoff, isn't it great?

[popkin16]

T-that's just amazing. *_*

♥ ♥

Perona now has a theme song!!

[flo-bizet.livejournal.com]

GAAAAAH you have reopened the wounds given to me in that chapter!!!!!

Mind you, they are not as beautiful as these words to which you have so skillfully woven together. No, they are more along the lines of "ZORO IS A FREAKIN' SCREEN TIME WHORE HOG!!!!" I wasn't able to comprehend the thoughts that might have been going through Sanji's head at the time, and so you are amazing for this!

*sighs* I envy your mad poetic drabble skillz, babe. ;_;

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

"ZORO IS A FREAKIN' SCREEN TIME WHORE HOG!!!!"

OMG! LOL! Yes.

AWwww...your comment is written so well and complements me so sweetly i feel suddenly modest and blushy.

Thanks!

[horusguard76.livejournal.com]

This is amazing. Totally lost for words right now.

What a take on that prompt! Such depth. Such emotion. Lovely. This is art not just fiction, you know that right?

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

WHAaaaaaaaaa!!??

I am getting such awesome comments on this one! Is it really that good? *re-reads then shakes her head in wonder*

Thanks so much! I'm so very happy you liked it!!!

(And it was called art! ART! I tell you, I'm going to get a swelled head.)

[horusguard76.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome. :) It's quite a pleasure to read.

[driftingforward.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this, especially as it matches my own view of what Sanji was thinking, but the best thing about it? No SanSmo! *happy dance*

Seriously, me likey.

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Hahaha! Well my OTP IS San/Zo...followed by San/Luff...Followed by OTP3san/zo/ace & San/zo/lu followed by San/Ace BUT!! San/Smo is just so FUN! And Unexpected! ANd lively when I have a good natured rival such as yourself!

Glad you like it!

WOOT!!