title: Pride and it's pitfalls
words:300
pairing: ZoSan
topic: Sin (Pride/the 7 deadly)
rating: male nakedness at one point.(R?Nc-17?)
Zoro thought that if anything could be considered a weakness it would be his pride. He never considered it one…a man should have pride. Pride as a man. Pride as a swordsman. Pride in doing things full tilt and nothing half-assed.
You have to have a good sense of direction with that much pride or you find yourself slipping into the other sins with ease.
The ero-cook for example. Zoro has strong emotions where he is concerned, hate, annoyance, respect, and some other things that real men don’t discuss but would show behind locked doors and caring touches. Zoros strong pride makes sure he takes the blond seriously and fully, constantly being aware of his presence and what he is doing.
The swordsman knows pride…and his sense of direction is flawed. So he falls head deep into knowing other sins full on.
He knows…
Sloth as he decides that watching the cook fillet the large tuna is worth skipping his push ups today.
Greed when Nami offers him money to do favors for the cook.
Wraith when the cook allows himself to be injured so easily.
Envy when the chef takes Namis hand in his and offers her his heart and a cool glass of some exotic drink he made just for her.
Gluttony as he asks for seconds, thirds, and fourths of the chefs cooking…knowing he will have to train more to make up for it but can’t stop devouring the flavors Sanji took the day nursing to life. Rescuing it from those who might stuff it down without the knowledge of just how much effort when into each element.
Lust when Zoro finds himself having to hide an erection when Sanji begins to carefully drag the soap up his legs to his groin as they share the shower…again.
words:300
pairing: ZoSan
topic: Sin (Pride/the 7 deadly)
rating: male nakedness at one point.(R?Nc-17?)
Zoro thought that if anything could be considered a weakness it would be his pride. He never considered it one…a man should have pride. Pride as a man. Pride as a swordsman. Pride in doing things full tilt and nothing half-assed.
You have to have a good sense of direction with that much pride or you find yourself slipping into the other sins with ease.
The ero-cook for example. Zoro has strong emotions where he is concerned, hate, annoyance, respect, and some other things that real men don’t discuss but would show behind locked doors and caring touches. Zoros strong pride makes sure he takes the blond seriously and fully, constantly being aware of his presence and what he is doing.
The swordsman knows pride…and his sense of direction is flawed. So he falls head deep into knowing other sins full on.
He knows…
Sloth as he decides that watching the cook fillet the large tuna is worth skipping his push ups today.
Greed when Nami offers him money to do favors for the cook.
Wraith when the cook allows himself to be injured so easily.
Envy when the chef takes Namis hand in his and offers her his heart and a cool glass of some exotic drink he made just for her.
Gluttony as he asks for seconds, thirds, and fourths of the chefs cooking…knowing he will have to train more to make up for it but can’t stop devouring the flavors Sanji took the day nursing to life. Rescuing it from those who might stuff it down without the knowledge of just how much effort when into each element.
Lust when Zoro finds himself having to hide an erection when Sanji begins to carefully drag the soap up his legs to his groin as they share the shower…again.
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Date: 2008-10-30 06:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-10-30 08:50 pm (UTC)Yay! You liked it! Thank you!
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Date: 2008-10-30 07:13 pm (UTC)I hope that one of your two (or maybe more) entries will win.. those ideas are fantastic. :)
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Date: 2008-10-30 08:54 pm (UTC)You are TOO kind! I am feeling a little misty...and am seconds away from giving a "you like me, you really like me!" speech.
I'm going to enter lots this week! I hope I win too but the important thing is moe gets lots of awesome entries!
But Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!Thank you! I'm so glad you like my stuff this much!
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Date: 2008-10-31 04:58 am (UTC)More entries? Woah. Indeed, make Moe work it! Give her masses of lovely stories to read! ;)
You're very welcome and let me play fortune teller here for a second... I foresee many more comments of mine to your works in the upcoming days! ;D hehehe
Btw is it allowed to befriend you? (just thought I warn ya, I'm a clingy little beasty lol Just ask Moe. )
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Date: 2008-10-31 05:39 am (UTC)*I dub thee friended!*
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