Poor ace...he doesn't realize his brothers a perv

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Title: Leaving
rating:R?
pairing: Ace/Luffy
Words: 126
topic: Sin (my last effort this topic)



Ace left the village sooner than he intended.

It wasn’t because of the villagers.

Or his eating the devil fruit.

It was because his brother…was a little too affectionate.

Actually, no. Luffy didn’t do anything wrong.

It was the sin that forced him to grab his bongo bag and head to the seas early.

Luffy could clutch, hug, nuzzle, squeeze, kiss and stroke him all night long when they shared a bed. There was no way the kid could know what he was doing to him. It was only a sin…only a taboo…if Ace reacted. If he actively showed his brother the right way…tried to bring his brother the same kind of pleasure.

Wait..no it wasn’t the sin that made him leave.

It was the temptation.

Comments

[cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com]

Temptation...mmm, troublesome stuff Ace! And that icon is soooo appropriate! 8D *joy*

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

I KNOW! Right? Pervy Luffy chases the innocence away...

[black-dove100.livejournal.com]

If I ever win and get to choose the topic I am SO using Temptation as the topic *smirk*

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

Ooooooo!! That sounds fun! I wish you luck!

[vtm577.livejournal.com]

VTM:>XD Mwhahahahahahahaha! Run Ace! RUN! Very nice, I love how it's Luffy being the instigator! lol! Awesome job!

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

When Luffy instigates it brings amusement and makes it a little less wrong doesn't it? Love that Luffy...pooor ace!