[identity profile] huabot.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Didacticism
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: S/Z
Wordcount: 100
Notes: yet more curving and curling



Things could be different.

His lips are red at first and taste like nothing so distinct as strawberry or cherry. Zoro licks the color onto his own mouth, kisses the sweetness away until he can nearly taste something bitter underneath but Sanji turns then, curling his hands against the threadbare upholstery, shoulders loose and curving under Zoro's fingers.

Zoro watches with heavy-lidded eyes. He is not so tired. So he slides away down to the planks, lying flat on his back, legs and arms spread to catch something in the warm heavy dark; a hint of light, a little cool.

Date: 2004-09-28 03:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
Oh, this is really beautiful. Awesome use of language and description. So many eye catching lines!

Date: 2004-09-28 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
Damn do you write some fine prose! Every sentence here is perfect. I love how you incorporated the theme without any direct mention.

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