[identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Rating: G
Pairing: uh, I swear I will write actual yaoi next time
Word Count: 300


Upon waking, Usopp felt the heaviness that sleep sometimes produced. The early morning cold chilled him to his bones and the dim light left his soul in shadow. Sitting up in bed, alone, he felt miles away from the others. He didn't like that about this new ship. He was used to being knocked out of his hammock by Luffy as he fought some dream monster, used to tripping over Zoro on his way out, used to being beaten to the bathroom by a few inches, used to distracting noise. Having a room to his own was frightening, even if the walls that separated them were thin.

He'd left them. He'd, he'd mutinied. They hadn't even mentioned it; perhaps they hadn't even considered he might really leave, that he could do without him. That was a painful thought, but not as painful as the idea that they might no longer trust him. He was a traitor as well as a weakling now.

After some sighing, he kicked back the sheets to rise and spotted the disembodied head with the lolling tongue sitting next to him.

His screams spanned the ocean and reached a pitch heard only by dogs. He raced out of his room and was soon ranting at Robin without even knowing what he was saying.

"--what were you thinking, I nearly had a heart attack, are you trying to KILL ME--?!"

In the background the others laughed, or threatened harm lest he lay a hand on darling Robin-chan, or said he must be healing well if his lungs were in such good shape, or noogied him, or pulled him by the ear to breakfast. He was immediately in a battle with Luffy over pancakes, and somehow, in the noise of it, he forgot he'd left at all.

Date: 2004-10-21 02:06 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (gomu gomu no glomp!)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
*dies from teh cute, happily*
Tho' I rather hope if/when they get a new ship they still don't have separate cabins; the boys' quarters are just too adorable.

...and I keep counting actions in the last paragraph, trying to figure out if Luffy's noogie-ing, laughing, or if the new mystery shipwright is present...

Date: 2004-10-21 03:05 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
compromise - they can have just enough rooms to all have doubles! then we get fights over who rooms with who. Or they can rotate. ^^

--mystery porn rooms? and here I thought that's what the kitchen was for...

Date: 2004-10-21 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
What I wouldn't do to see that fic... ^_^

Date: 2004-10-21 06:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
I swear I've read this plot. Or something like it. Can't remember where, tho' ^^;;;;

Date: 2004-10-21 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
Wow, angst AND humor in 300? That takes skill... ^_^ *loves*

Date: 2004-10-21 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
*DIEZ* I LOVE THIS! I love the topic! You may just have written the winning fic for your own topic. XD Seriously, good job. And I would SO love to see the fic where Usopp/Luffy are glad about Zoro and Sanji bonking because they can sneak food. I'll have to look into that...

Date: 2004-10-21 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inu-neko.livejournal.com
The best kind of fic is fic that leads to even MORE fic. >D

Date: 2004-10-24 02:59 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dethorats
That was so marvelous! I really like your depiction of his screaming reaching dog pitch. And I hope that this is exactly what happens (except maybe the Going Merry will miraculously get fixed, too) in the manga.

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